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“Holidays : home or abroad” - *IELTS Band 7.0.* live essay correction

Watch me correct a Task 2 essay about domestic or overseas holidays. This essay is especially useful for seeing excellent coherence and cohesion as well as a great range of vocabulary used accurately and meaningfully. The task achievement is also very good, though there are problems with presenting and explaining some of the arguments in the body paragraphs.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ayvrgs9_Rd0&t=4s

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"Holidays : home or abroad" - *Band 7.0.* - live IELTS Writing Task 2 essay correction This is a live correction of an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay about domestic or overseas holidays. This essay is especially useful for seeing excellent coherenc...

“Problems with the internet” - *IELTS Band 6.5.* live essay correction

Watch me correct a Task 2 essay about problems with the internet in real time. The student’s essay is especially useful as an example of excellent coherence and cohesion as well as having a great range of accurate and meaningful vocabulary.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jVp8uKNDgSk&t=27s

For more essays and corrections like this, check out the Essay Archive here :
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“Problems with the internet” - *IELTS Band 6.5.* - live essay correction This is a real time correction of an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay about problems with the internet. This essay is especially useful for seeing excellent cohere...